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ChrisKayler wrote:
A really nice set of images. Call me ignorant, but I didn't realize the beaches around Malibu were so beautiful! The first image is my favorite. As you said, the sample of colors in the sky is really a sweet, sweet sample of colors I particularly like the glow of misty backlit. My main gripe is that I would like to see the scene shown with a bit wider lens or a few steps back. I personally find the foreground rock, and particularly the spire in the upper left to be quite tight towards the edges of the frame. In regards to the second image, I really like the composition and the way it draws my eye into the scene and ultimately those mountains on the distant horizon. I do think the exposure could use some work. I would try to shift the foreground only a bit towards the blue side to reduce the red channel, as the image is blown out a bit in that area. Perhaps some general darkening, particularly along the brightest parts up in the upper left would be a good idea. Overall, a nice set of images to look at. ...Show more →
Thanks Chris! Ha, I didn't even know we had beaches like this until I got into photography!
I appreciate your comment and suggestions and I'll play around with the second image tonight.
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