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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Deep In Thought


I believe that I posted this before, but decided to take another stab at it.

I'm predicted that Scott will dig the square crop, but I'd like to know what everyone thinks.

Cheers!

Jeff







Dec 07, 2014 at 03:55 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Deep In Thought


Animals and people can be cropped per subject, landscapes not so much IMO.

I like the pose and comp pretty much, my major nit is the bright spots, I would darken them a bit.




Dec 07, 2014 at 04:46 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Deep In Thought


ben egbert wrote:
Animals and people can be cropped per subject, landscapes not so much IMO.

I like the pose and comp pretty much, my major nit is the bright spots, I would darken them a bit.



Thanks, Ben - the background spots?



Dec 07, 2014 at 06:37 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Deep In Thought


Well bigger than spots, I mean the white areas. They could be darker. Especially the one by the monkeys right knee.


Dec 07, 2014 at 07:48 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Deep In Thought


I agree with Ben, although there is something about the busy-ness of the background in this and other shots by you that I like.
Scott



Dec 08, 2014 at 02:17 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Deep In Thought


sbeme wrote:
I agree with Ben, although there is something about the busy-ness of the background in this and other shots by you that I like.
Scott


It's all good - I dropped the background a bit more last (just forgot to post) and it enhances isolation while still giving you the busyness that you're digging.

I'll post the rework postwork.



Dec 08, 2014 at 02:23 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Deep In Thought


Updated.







Dec 08, 2014 at 04:34 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Deep In Thought


Like the update.


Dec 08, 2014 at 05:03 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Deep In Thought


ben egbert wrote:
Like the update.


Thanks for the assist!



Dec 08, 2014 at 05:04 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Deep In Thought


less chaotic=better

Scott



Dec 08, 2014 at 07:35 PM





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