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speakit101
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Practicing here working on my lighting.






Edited on Dec 04, 2014 at 07:35 PM · View previous versions



Dec 04, 2014 at 02:43 PM
Jim Rickards
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Lighting looks good. And you can't beat that smile.

Your watermark says "RazarsharpImages". A bit too sharp, however. We see the backdrop in sharp focus as well as the chair (or couch).

It would be better to blur the background/backdrop. Whether the chair is blurred or not is much less important.



Dec 04, 2014 at 04:20 PM
speakit101
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · C&c please


How about this one..


Dec 04, 2014 at 07:36 PM
coreybell
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · C&c please


Your lighting is good, looks like two light sources. A little bright on my cheapo laptop?


Dec 04, 2014 at 07:44 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · C&c please


Yes I had a Beauty Dish and a Octabox as my fill light.



Dec 04, 2014 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · C&c please


I might vignette this just a bit to focus the eye on her.


Dec 05, 2014 at 03:52 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · C&c please


The artificial blur makes the picture look unprofessional. It also needs a lot of retouching (i.e. the white spots on her pants). Also, is that pose flattering her belly?


Dec 06, 2014 at 11:55 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · C&c please


Calvino good points and points taken but my main focus was lighting.


Dec 07, 2014 at 06:32 AM





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