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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


Here's from my trip to this relatively unknown park in northern Arizona. It's not big, but it's packed with interesting formations.

Added a cropped version after Jason and Jim's suggestion.

C&C always.

Kelly











Edited on Dec 08, 2014 at 01:30 PM · View previous versions



Dec 02, 2014 at 04:04 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


Kelly,

A very lovely scene and very well captured. I like the nice soft colors of the sky. Reminds me of a set on a western . I don't think there is any place in AZ that doesn't have interesting formations. If I were to offer a crit, I like the back ground all the way to the first flower bush before the big rocks. The foreground is a bit uninteresting for me. I don't know if you have other shots that were closer to the bush or maybe try some different crops.

Jason



Dec 02, 2014 at 04:13 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


Hey Kelly,

What a really cool place. I love the top 2/3rds of this shot. If you cropped to a 4:5 format and cropped right below the flowering plant, I think you would have an incredible shot. I think the rocks at the bottom of this shot drag it down and distract from the flow.

Jim

PS. I hadn't even read Jason's comment, but I see he had the same suggestion. How about cropping it and adding it to your original photo? Don't replace the original, just edit the post and add it in.



Dec 04, 2014 at 03:55 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


Sorry it took so long to add this; I was gone over the weekend.

Here's the edit with the newly cropped version as per Jason and Jim's suggestion.

Kelly



Dec 08, 2014 at 01:25 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


Cool shots from a favorite place on the planet for me. Some don't know this is the origin of the Grand Canyon!


Dec 08, 2014 at 07:52 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


Thanks Mark.
A lot of the river rafting tours through GC start right near here.

Kelly



Dec 09, 2014 at 10:41 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Marble Canyon, AZ EDITED


I like the second one better. Stronger FG. Nice skies.
Harsha



Dec 12, 2014 at 08:24 AM





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