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Paul, what a beautiful scene you captured! Looked at your Flickr collection, you spent quite some time there, and got some wonderful shots. I especially like the ones with Navajo kids, and toddler girl with grandma on a horse are just precious. Did you work with the guide?
On critique part: foreground is pretty bright, and pulls attention away from the grand scene and human figure on the right. My suggestion would be to crop off the lower 1/4th. Also, there is something with the level - either picture is not corrected for wide lens distortion, or simply slightly slanted. Adding warming filter (in PP) would beautify scene further - I rarely see sunrise so bright yellow. In a desert, there is always some amount of dust in the air that causes warmer glow. Your other shots have more natural colors, by the way.
Sasha
Sasha.
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