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This is my granddaughter and wonder if you think it is good enough to be given as a gift to my son and daughter in law..please critique...gently.

Thanks, Carol






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Nov 29, 2014 at 12:52 AM
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I think they would greatly appreciate this as a gift Carol. I like your choice of a light vignette here but I might slim it down a bit over her right hand/arm.
Douglas



Nov 29, 2014 at 08:50 AM
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I am with Douglas.
Why wouldn't they like it? Cute pose, well-captured, nicely processed. I like high key but not so much a fan of negative vignette, which I do think works well here. Just a bit more selectively.

Scott



Nov 29, 2014 at 05:37 PM
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Thanks Douglas and Scott...I actually like the image but agree with you both on the vignette. I will play with it..I have her two days a week so I will shoot some more. I am thinking different clothes, shoes etc as I see it here that is what came to mind. I will try and get a smile too. Thanks again!


Nov 29, 2014 at 06:16 PM
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How old is she Carolyn?
Looks like it won't be hard to get some other cute and engaging captures!
Scott



Nov 29, 2014 at 06:19 PM
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I tried to add this to the other and poof...not sure what I did. Forgive the non b&w. She is 15 months and found her feet and she is on the move...

Any suggestions are greatly appreciated Scott...very hard when it is yours,you think they are all great...but we know that usually they are not. That is why I ask for a gentle but honest critique...Thanks so much. C



Nov 29, 2014 at 07:17 PM
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Carol:
I prefer the Black and White previous photo. The branch/leaves are a distraction and somewhat hide her face here.
Douglas



Nov 30, 2014 at 08:19 AM
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it is cute but the leaf in front of the mouth detracts
light band left edge detracts
you might also consider posting on Critique for more detailed response (esp from AuntiPode, aka Karen, a former professional portrait photographer)
Scott



Nov 30, 2014 at 12:42 PM





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