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A possible crop to 1:1
No crop ... losing the golf and grandfather frames on the wall eradicate the narrative. You may be here today to tell us about him, but there will be times that people will be relying on the information in the image to tell the story about this beloved man.
I thought a bit about cropping the left window, but it also changes the projection / direction / longing for where he is looking. I did bring up the tonal values in each however because I felt like the message is really about the man ... not about the contrast in the lighting or what the camera captured and processed by its built in algorithm profile for (not) handling the DR.
Your message, your call .. but I'm going with the man (imo @ real message), not the camera (tool with limitations for capturing / delivering the message) or lighting (enhancement / impediment to the message).
Could use more refinement, but hopefully you get the gist and hope everyone had a Blessed Thanksgiving to share with their loved ones.
Edited on Nov 28, 2014 at 12:55 PM · View previous versions
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