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Archive 2014 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)

  
 
Mike Condax
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


This was not a planned shoot as we were just out for a hike with Demetri's Uncle.

C&C Welcome -- I like the locations and will use them again for a planned shoot.

How could I improve with the pictures posted below...either on the front end with the posing or on the back end with the Post Processing.

1 - http://consciouseye.smugmug.com/People/Demetri/Demetri/i-zzcwffD/1/L/untitled-0987-L.jpg Edited

2 - http://consciouseye.smugmug.com/People/Demetri/Demetri/i-DNfztcT/0/L/untitled-0943-L.jpg

3 - http://consciouseye.smugmug.com/People/Demetri/Demetri/i-7pm4Rmj/0/L/untitled-0910-L.jpg

4 - http://consciouseye.smugmug.com/People/Demetri/Demetri/i-7fpF8Mk/0/L/untitled-0992-Color-L.jpg

5 - http://consciouseye.smugmug.com/People/Demetri/Demetri/i-hxQJ5KN/1/L/untitled-0992-2-L.jpg

6 - http://consciouseye.smugmug.com/People/Demetri/Demetri/i-hTkqMD4/0/L/untitled-0996-L.jpg

Edited on Nov 26, 2014 at 01:05 PM · View previous versions



Nov 25, 2014 at 10:05 AM
John Caldwell
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


Very nice and natural series here, with extra points for believability. The first and last would probably be my choices.

John Caldwell



Nov 25, 2014 at 07:50 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


I feel like the first one stands out as being processed a bit differently than the rest. I think it needs a boost in the blacks to make it a bit more consistent with the others.


Nov 25, 2014 at 08:58 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


Agree with Nexu. #1 was my least favourite, but only because of the processing. Other aspects of the shot are good. I was going to say 'muted colours'.


Nov 26, 2014 at 01:05 AM
Mike Condax
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


John Caldwell wrote:
Very nice and natural series here, with extra points for believability. The first and last would probably be my choices.

John Caldwell


Thank You John for taking time to comment! I am pleased with the way these turned out! I am going to make some minor adjustments to the last one and give it to my Brother for Christmas!



Nov 26, 2014 at 01:00 PM
Mike Condax
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


Nexu wrote:
I feel like the first one stands out as being processed a bit differently than the rest. I think it needs a boost in the blacks to make it a bit more consistent with the others.


Thanks Nexu for taking time to comment as well! I went back and made some adjustments to the first picture. Originally I had not planned to edit them all the same way so that I could break them up a little. I went back and added some contrast which did make a difference. I think I may have starred at it too long!



Nov 26, 2014 at 01:02 PM
Mike Condax
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Out for a Hike with Demetri (6 Pics)


Jim Rickards wrote:
Agree with Nexu. #1 was my least favourite, but only because of the processing. Other aspects of the shot are good. I was going to say 'muted colours'.


Thanks Jim! I agree with the muted colors as well.

Happy Thanksgiving to All!



Nov 26, 2014 at 01:02 PM





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