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Nov 03, 2014 at 07:53 PM

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Very nice - well seen and executed.

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Nov 03, 2014 at 07:58 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Ngorongoro Dawn

Nicely seen.

I might suggest bringing up the tonal value of the contour a (slight) bit more, so it isn't as overpowered/dominated by the mass/value of the sky.

Nov 03, 2014 at 08:18 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Ngorongoro Dawn

Can't believe I like another one, given my mood, but I do.

At the risk of seeming in a sepia rut, maybe a sepia version?

Nov 03, 2014 at 10:11 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Ngorongoro Dawn

I like the original. Very rule-of-thirds-ish (good thing). FWIW

Nov 04, 2014 at 01:21 PM

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I like the mood of the photo. I like Jeff's crop as it takes out the brighter stop on top and draws more focus to the contrast in the middle.

Nov 05, 2014 at 11:13 AM

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This is lovely Scott. I think it's my favorite of your work that I've seen. I like it just as it is, although Karen's sepia treatment is also nice.

Nov 05, 2014 at 11:38 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Ngorongoro Dawn

Scott, what can I say but WOW. This a gallery worthy piece and while you can crop some from the top I think using the cloning tool to add some clouds into open space at the top might work as well. Simplicity at its best.

Nov 05, 2014 at 05:30 PM

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Bob Jarman wrote:
Very nice - well seen and executed.

Bob

thank you
Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:31 PM

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RustyBug wrote:
Nicely seen.

I might suggest bringing up the tonal value of the contour a (slight) bit more, so it isn't as overpowered/dominated by the mass/value of the sky.

thanks Kent. I will give it a play
Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:32 PM

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beavens wrote:
Scott,

Awesome, awesome picture! One of your best landscapes for sure. Such dark atmosphere contrasting with the bright light shining through. Reminds me of LOTR when Gandalf came rolling in on that wave of light.

I would tighten up the crop some - losing the top of the clouds increases the drama IMO and losing a bit from the left forces my eyes to go from left to right and really take in the view.

Maybe I'm just seeing things, but I also think I'm noticing a bit of noise.

EXCELLENT SHOT!

Jeff
Thanks!
Your crop works too.
Yes, some noise for me to reduce

Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:32 PM

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AuntiPode wrote:
Can't believe I like another one, given my mood, but I do.

At the risk of seeming in a sepia rut, maybe a sepia version?

Nice sepia re-interpretation
Hope I am not conflicting with your mood

Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:33 PM

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bryanlindsey wrote:
I like the original. Very rule-of-thirds-ish (good thing). FWIW

thanks-ish.
really!
Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:34 PM

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Wildcats_Fans wrote:
I like the mood of the photo. I like Jeff's crop as it takes out the brighter stop on top and draws more focus to the contrast in the middle.
always help to hear some consistency to adjustments
thanks for commenting
Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:35 PM

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dmacmillan wrote:
This is lovely Scott. I think it's my favorite of your work that I've seen. I like it just as it is, although Karen's sepia treatment is also nice.
I am quite pleased. I like the sepia too.
Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:36 PM

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Oregon Gal wrote:
Scott, what can I say but WOW. This a gallery worthy piece and while you can crop some from the top I think using the cloning tool to add some clouds into open space at the top might work as well. Simplicity at its best.

thanks Barbara!
Scott

Nov 07, 2014 at 09:36 PM

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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Ngorongoro Dawn

The heavens opened up for you!

Very nice...print it as is.

Nov 08, 2014 at 09:59 PM

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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Ngorongoro Dawn

dmacmillan wrote:
This is lovely Scott. I think it's my favorite of your work that I've seen.

The more I consider it, the more I agree.

Nov 09, 2014 at 03:05 PM


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