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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Stirling Ranges Farmland


I recently had the privilege of spending a couple of weeks camping to the south of Perth, Western Australia.

A time of rest, relaxation, hiking and photography. This picture was taken close to our campsite in the late afternoon with a Sony ILCE-7R and Tokina 17mm F3.5 AT-X.

As I am always striving to improve my landscape photography, any comments and critique are very welcome and much appreciated.

Thanks for taking the time to view this.

Shaun







Oct 26, 2014 at 04:24 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Stirling Ranges Farmland


Hi Shaun, I really like this, great depth and balance with the tree and striking clouds, and the B&W works very well too. There is just a slight "curvature" of the horizon line which is perhaps due to the WA lens, maybe this could be corrected in LR.


Oct 26, 2014 at 05:19 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Stirling Ranges Farmland


Hey Shaun,

Nice work with this one, I think you did really well in how you framed the shot. Good job.

Jim



Oct 26, 2014 at 12:15 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Stirling Ranges Farmland


I like this shot and also noticed the bending or curving horizon. Its heavier on the right (viewers perspective) but a tad bit noticeable on the left as well.

Agree worthy to try and correct it PP as you have a nice image here.



Oct 26, 2014 at 12:26 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Stirling Ranges Farmland


Thanks to the 3 above who were kind enough to give their thought and critiques. Very much appreciated.

I have corrected as proposed and re-posted.

Shaun







Oct 26, 2014 at 05:43 PM





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