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Of the road, from the road, while on the road. Momma wanted to make a "road trip" to YNP, etc. ... might use this for a sublime memento @ non-descript, coulda been any day along the way.

Abandoned technicals for effort toward mood ... maybe a little (lot) lemonade, as veiling flare was a bit rough.







Oct 25, 2014 at 01:27 PM
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Tells a tale. Some of these wide open spaces can be pretty lonely compared to urban life.

Not sure what to say about the sky, its bright but not blown, it would not be the same without it so I would leave it as is.



Oct 25, 2014 at 02:03 PM
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Can you mine more from the deep shadows - a little less contrast?


Oct 25, 2014 at 03:18 PM
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Here's the sooc ... I think I could manage to find some lower contrast. Feel free to play.







Oct 25, 2014 at 04:12 PM
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I suspect only the raw would stand much of a chance.


Oct 25, 2014 at 05:40 PM
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The lighting was none too good and the sky seems totally blown out. Anyway, I guess it tells a story so I gave it a quick try.







Oct 25, 2014 at 08:39 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · The Road ...


Thanks Jim,

Just had you on my mind (see 4HH post). A little veiling flare I believe is the term ... but, lemonade has its place at times.



Oct 25, 2014 at 08:58 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · The Road ...


A different take:







Oct 25, 2014 at 11:37 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · The Road ...


Nice rework, I also had a feeling that it needed some rotation.


Oct 26, 2014 at 09:32 AM
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I like the mood you are evoking, Kent. But the technocrat in me wants the shadow detail more extracted. I am picturing something a bit darker than Karen's rework and closer to your original, but with those deep shadows from the tree remaining heavy and powerful. Curious how you chose your vantage point. And I think you chose very well. It makes a strong statement.

Scott



Oct 26, 2014 at 03:52 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · The Road ...


Darker with the sky re-colored?







Oct 26, 2014 at 04:24 PM
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NICE!
Now let's see what Kent thinks!

Scott



Oct 26, 2014 at 04:46 PM





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