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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · San Diego travel


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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s7/v167/p58021577-5.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s7/v169/p440015517-5.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s6/v138/p600843716-6.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s6/v146/p461898409-5.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s7/v167/p896855684-6.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s7/v168/p850622740-5.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s7/v167/p283498864-6.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s8/v80/p243543299-5.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s7/v160/p299958451-6.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s6/v138/p292102557-5.jpg

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http://wenkanphoto.zenfolio.com/img/s12/v177/p71575919-6.jpg



Oct 19, 2014 at 03:50 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · San Diego travel


Very nice, but a number of them she is centered or very close to it.....rules of 1/3rds would help a number of them be a bit more interesting.....


Oct 19, 2014 at 07:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · San Diego travel


Herb wrote:
Very nice, but a number of them she is centered or very close to it.....rules of 1/3rds would help a number of them be a bit more interesting.....


I think many of the backgrounds are symmetric. So the model should also be in the center to make the whole picture symmetric. If put at the side then it will be distracting.



Oct 19, 2014 at 07:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · San Diego travel


wenkanzhu wrote:
I think many of the backgrounds are symmetric. So the model should also be in the center to make the whole picture symmetric. If put at the side then it will be distracting.


I"m going to respectfully but completely disagree with you on this. There are times that it's a good choice to place a subject in the center but for me it's not based solely on the symmetry of the background. If you had said that it was your artistic decision to place the subject in the center, then that's your decision -- but it's still subject to criticism.



Oct 19, 2014 at 10:14 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · San Diego travel


Wow. I count 4 of the 11 where the subject in in the middle of the frame, which compliments those compositions except for the swing picture which doesn't follow any rules. I think they are all great!


Oct 19, 2014 at 10:25 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · San Diego travel


I think the middle position of the subject here works not so bad only on 2nd and 11th photos due to the geometry on that shots...
Talking about other photos. Its just my opinion but I'll compose differ on the 9th photo. And maybe I'd try to show the movement of subject (like you did it on the 11th).
Landscape is beautiful on the 10th photo but that stones make her not only heavy but also "humpback"...
And I'd try to avoid horns and homes from her head on 4-, 6-, 7th photos...

Otherwise, I see that you are extremly good in choosing beautiful ladys and locations In this, I'm sure that you' correct some things and your photos would be even better!



Oct 20, 2014 at 09:12 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · San Diego travel


The centering is one thing but what bothered me was seeing so many pictures with the bottom of her dress cut off!
Look at 8, 9, & 10, as well as #2 & #6. I think each of these would show better had the dress been seen in full.



Oct 21, 2014 at 12:12 AM





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