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I don't think I have shared this for you critique, feedback
and I know there is a good title.....but it escapes me so far
I do have it within a slideshow accompanied by music. And as this image comes up, a great clarinet riff on an Louis Armstrong recording plays.


Scott



GoetzPhotoz 2014




Oct 18, 2014 at 08:55 PM
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Tusk - A - Knee



Oct 18, 2014 at 10:48 PM
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Does this do anything for anyone?
Scott



Oct 21, 2014 at 10:42 PM
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Scott,

I am really, really digging this.

I love the super tight crop, the detail and the awesome lines created by the tusks.

I also would love to see a BW conversion of this.

Nice one!

Jeff



Oct 21, 2014 at 11:47 PM
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Scott - Sorry, saw it at work and didn't comment, then forgot.
I love elephants, and I love this photo. Great interplay of different curves, and great detail on the tusks.

Since this is a critique forum - I would suggest a bit more negative on the left, maybe double what you have now? Seems a bit cramped to me. Would also suggest a bit more shadow recovery on the right hand side. The trunk detail seems lost in the shadow of the tusk.



Oct 22, 2014 at 01:48 AM
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Love the shot, can't top Kents name.


Oct 22, 2014 at 11:14 AM
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beavens wrote:
Scott,

I am really, really digging this.

I love the super tight crop, the detail and the awesome lines created by the tusks.

I also would love to see a BW conversion of this.

Nice one!

Jeff

Why don't you give it a try.
Glad the tight crop works.
Thanks for offering your input.
Scott




Oct 24, 2014 at 09:49 PM
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FarmerJohn wrote:
Scott - Sorry, saw it at work and didn't comment, then forgot.
I love elephants, and I love this photo. Great interplay of different curves, and great detail on the tusks.

Since this is a critique forum - I would suggest a bit more negative on the left, maybe double what you have now? Seems a bit cramped to me. Would also suggest a bit more shadow recovery on the right hand side. The trunk detail seems lost in the shadow of the tusk.


Thanks John. I will tweak the shadows.
Scott




Oct 24, 2014 at 09:50 PM
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ben egbert wrote:
Love the shot, can't top Kents name.


thanks Ben
Scott



Oct 24, 2014 at 09:51 PM
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Yep. A genuine groaner.


Oct 25, 2014 at 12:43 AM





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