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Seems to me like you had some interesting elements there but I don't really understand your decisions in terms of focus, lighting, and posing. Seem to send mixed messages.
In 1, for example, one guy is significantly out of focus. I could sort of understand having one guy IN focus where he is presumably the lead, but one guy out of focus looks like a mistake to me.
The lighting also seems to highlight or hide certain members of the band in a way that doesn't seem consistent or understandable. Some have low "ghoul" lighting, some have straight on, some have above. Possibly for a group of 4 you didn't really have enough lights to really control things.
The posing also seems a little strange with the guitar guy in full "modeling" mode and the rest of the guys just sort of standing around.
I probably made the shots sound worse than they are and maybe you were after something that I'm not picking up on. Just giving you my initial reaction.
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