JimFox
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Hey Marcy,
I can't say these are superb work myself. That's not to put down the effort you put into these, but all 3 shots have some issues, so they are good, but not great.
1st, the light painting... for anyone who has done, we know that light painting can be extremely difficult. Most often uneven lighting, or it's too bright and doesn't look natural. And both of your first two shots have both issues. The light painting is not even, and especially in #1 it's too bright and doesn't look natural at all.
In #1, the Milky Way is pretty faded, now in #2, you captured the Milky Way pretty well, and I like the look of it. But in #2, the tree along the bottom is moving and blurry. So you would want to use a layer mask and use the sharper tree from #1 in the shot of #2, or perhaps just clone it out all together?
#3 is crooked. It looks like you based the shot on the Milky Way not realizing the mountain peak in it was crooked? Or maybe you didn't care? But it is crooked and looks off.
It's great to see you out being creative and trying new stuff, but in this case I think you should take the lessons learned and go back out again and try it over.
Jim
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