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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Ants of Light


Another from my "Ordinary Things" project. As a child I was fascinated by sun beams that poked into darkened rooms. Guess I still am. Maybe B & W?












Sep 20, 2014 at 06:28 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Ants of Light


I like it! Nice lines in all directions.
I think the color one is better. The B+W one loses the richness of red tones from the floor.

Nitwise - the upper right and lower left beams of light seem a little too blue? The highlight above the floormat on the left seems too strong. I would expect to see some of the door itself above the floormat, but it's overpowered by that light.



Sep 21, 2014 at 10:14 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Ants of Light


AuntiPode wrote:
Another from my "Ordinary Things" project. As a child I was fascinated by sun beams that poked into darkened rooms. Guess I still am. Maybe B & W?


Lines are neat, orderly, and well-behaved

Played a bit. Meh?

Bob









Sep 21, 2014 at 10:44 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Ants of Light


Flip a coin @ color vs. mono ... each can have an appeal. For me, the color promotes the warmth of the light, the mono promotes the graphic element.

The rug is a bit of a draw, and I'm a bit "Hmmm" at a possible diff comp. Maybe some reshoots @ diff time of day/perspective ... @ more possibilities. Nice find.



Sep 21, 2014 at 12:17 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Ants of Light


BW makes a stronger statement about the "ant (aunt?) lines". I also find the image elegant in BW.
Neat find; good eye.
I think finding an image in our everday environment and commute is among the hardest of challenges. And you succeeded, Karen.

Scott



Sep 21, 2014 at 06:46 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Ants of Light


Thanks, guys!


Sep 21, 2014 at 06:58 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Ants of Light


I like the color.
Nicely captured.

Greg



Sep 22, 2014 at 07:38 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Ants of Light


I love the wood floors especially that color, so I like the color version. I do like Bob's crop


Sep 22, 2014 at 10:51 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Ants of Light


I like the color and while I also like the crop, I find the original works better for me. I enjoy the addition of the blinds and feel they bring something to the image.


Sep 22, 2014 at 11:26 AM





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