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BigIronCruiser wrote:
No problem with off-center portraits. Having said that, the empty space is typically in the direction of the nose or chest. In #7, the bride has her head turned to camera right, and the groom's head is pointed straight at the camera. In what appears to be a desire to hide the pews, your empty space is opposite the direction of the brides nose/chest. Moving the bride & groom to the other side of the aisle with empty space to their right would have looked better IMO. One other nit is that the cross is stuck right in the crown of the brides head.
In the case of #9, what's the value of the empty space? The girls are in a straight line perpendicular to the camera, and they're looking right at you. There aren't any leading lines, so a viewers eyes may be distracted by the bright stuff in the background that would have been (mostly) hidden if the group had been centered.
#15 is off center, and I get it because you wanted to crop the brides dress.
No rights or wrongs, just food for thought....Show more →
Word, I'll chew on it. Thanks again.
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Prettym1k3 wrote:
These are well done. Light, airy, and I'm sure they'll love them.
Make a run to Walmart, Kmart, Target or Bed Bath and Beyond. Buy a wooden hanger, at least for the bride's dress. It'll totally change your dress shots.
I've been meaning to do this for a while... I'll make sure it happens before the next wedding. Thanks.
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