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Mongrel wrote:
I dig aviation...so these are interesting to me no matter what. I think the overall effect if good-exposure etc. look fine to me.
A couple of thoughts...
First image I'm good with as presented. Nothing I see "wrong" and I don't have any suggestions to make it better.
Second image-the only thing I would change, if possible, would be to show the rounded over part of the extreme end of the fuselage that is cut off in the shot. I think it would be better to include that part and loose some of the forward part that is included now.
I completely agree, I feel the round part of the fuselage should be included. I did a minor amount of perceived straightening and lost it, I can re-process to include. Thank you for the suggestion. I have included 2 additional images, one taken in landscape mode including the entire rear fuselage and another in portrait mode, excluding the complete tail section but including more of the plane.
Comments and critique on the two new images are always welcome. Comment on any portion of the image including but not limited to composition, processing, likes or dislikes. Re-works are always welcome. I learn from any and all comments.
The original images, I thought were off on white balance and tint so I adjusted accordingly on the newly posted images.
UPLOADED INCORRECT IMAGES, CORRECTED NOW
Edited on Sep 06, 2014 at 05:45 PM · View previous versions
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