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Archive 2014 · Simple portrait

  
 
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Aug 24, 2014 at 08:49 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Simple portrait


Simple but effective...if I had to find a fault is I find the teeth to be really bright.


Aug 24, 2014 at 09:12 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Simple portrait


yeah she has really white teeth...LoL..I didn't whiten them...


Aug 24, 2014 at 09:20 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Simple portrait


Well executed portrait. Nice lighting. Beautiful bokeh. (What lens did you use?)

Only nit I have is, she seems to be leaning back a bit too much. (Maybe if you cropped a smidge off the bottom it wouldn't be as noticeable.) (No that won't work because then you would be chopping off the hands.) Tell her stand straighter next time.

Wow, I wish my teeth looked like that!



Aug 24, 2014 at 10:42 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Simple portrait


bbourizk wrote:
Simple but effective...if I had to find a fault is I find the teeth to be really bright.


Agreed. I might do some localized brightness adjustments on her teeth. 1/3 of a stop or so. Also, the smile looks a little forced. Otherwise great!



Aug 24, 2014 at 10:43 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Simple portrait


Simply put, very nice!!


Aug 24, 2014 at 11:22 AM
airfrogusmc
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Simple portrait


Thanks guys..

So I should do a quick mash and bring her teeth down a 1/2 stop? I doubt she would like that...
I'll bet she paid a lot of $$$ for that smile...



Aug 24, 2014 at 03:58 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Simple portrait


I disagree about the leaning back. It looks natural because when we cross our arms we generally lean back a little.

I'm just imagining what the portrait would look like if the background were in key with her outfit. I usually try to use high key backgrounds with high key clothing to make the face stand out more. But this really is a beautiful portrait.



Aug 25, 2014 at 06:59 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Simple portrait


Thanks...


Aug 25, 2014 at 09:22 PM





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