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schlotz wrote:
Regarding your posts:
1 - The action is 'ok' (not peak) but the negative space detracts, re-crop so the players fill most of the frame
2 - Good action, would have been better if shot from the end line where they'd been facing the lens. BG not so hot.
3 - Action is fine, crop a bit tighter... looks a tad soft on my screen
4 - Suggest re-crop to portrait an only include the two engaged
5 - Fine, not sure what the focus of the shot is....
6 - Too far away, action probably would have been better a frame or two later, plus cropped
7 - Too far away, if it can take it, I would crop this one significantly
8 - Not bad, I would go portrait vs square. Is there any more room at the bottom?
9 - Crop tighter
10 - Standing up? This one doesn't work for me....
Keep shooting, it gets better
Matt
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Thanks for the feedback, I do appreciate it. Crop tighter seems to be the general theme.
3. Might be some motion blur, was losing sun and hit my ceiling on auto-iso so the ss was dropping - few minutes left to the half so rather than switch cameras I rolled with it. Didn't look too bad smaller but I see it now that I'm on a bigger screen.
6. He drubbed the play, the next few frames weren't any good.
8. No room at the bottom, I was leaving way too much empty space up top on a lot of portrait shots, first time working on a monopod is the excuse I'm going with , just something for me to keep in mind in the future.
10. Yes standing, I thought it had a different enough feel compared to the rest to be included.
Thanks again for taking the time.
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