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Not quite seeing the emptiness either, except in 16 which doesn't seem to show anything....
There is a lot I like here. #10 is awesome. #4, 5, 8, 9, 11, 12 do a great job of telling the story of the day.
As for some things to think about.... On #2, if you get a bride in the grass, try not to include the concrete in the picture if you can.
The black and white conversion in #4 doesn't seem to have the same high dynamics of the others Look at the wood in the ceiling over the crucifix and compare that to a shot like #7.
Speaking of #7, it screams for centering to me. Rule of thirds doesn't quite work in a shot like this.
In #8, I think I would either like the background blurred more so that the girl doesn't get lost in the background, or to cut her out. I am confused why the parents are so far left otherwise.
In #5 and #9 It would have been great to have you on the other side if possible. I always try to be so that I am seeing the bride's face more than the groom's. Two reasons for this, the first being she is the bride and it is generally considered her day, and usually the groom is taller so it is easier to see him over her.
The colors in #12 and #13 are different.
I would run another noise reduction pass on #18.
I would like to see the face on #20.
Watch feet on #21.
Finally the sepia in #19 means her dress blends into the floor. For me that is a preference thing.
Of course, please take all of those with a grain of salt. They do tell a story, which is really what you want.
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