Bob Jarman Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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Lovely, engaging smile - better take your vitamins Dad!
My preference is #1. I like the spontaneity, wonderful natural wisps of hair, and of course her smile. While she communicates her enjoying the moment, I think eye contact would substantially improve.
Technically it is much better than #2 re focus and processing, IMO. If we could take the technique of #1 and embed her direct smile of #2 you'd have the best of all worlds.
Overall, the posts (4x4?), given the relative size, visually distract from the subject as does the large white background area in #1.
In this case the de-saturation works, I suspect the full color version is rather bold visually.
She appears to be a very willing subject - shoot away! Thanks for sharing.
My 2¢,
Bob
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