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tele_pathic wrote:
In general, a good set. I like a lot of these.
13. Glass reflection I like, and clients like this type of shot, for good reason I think.
16. I really like the low-key b&w here.
15. I don't get this at all. What's the context of the environment? Do they work there? Is that where they met? If so, ok, that enviro shoot makes sense. If not, I don't get it.
6, 13, 19. As they move-in to kiss, his expression does not quite match hers. She is smiling, and he is not.
10, 18. He is looking at her, but she is looking elsewhere, not at him, not at the camera. It looks odd to my eye. I would ask her to look at the camera.
Are these too square and static? Hmmm, I don't know. Yes, many of the poses are similar, but that might be a result of the over-share you mention. But you have a couple "fun" shots I there. ...Show more →
Thank you. I really appreciate your taking the time and thought to critique. Re 15, they do work on the campus ( not in that building) but really we just wanted to try something different. For what it's worth, that is one of the clients favorites!
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