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Archive 2014 · Some Kid Pics -Please C &C

  
 
ivan308
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Some Kid Pics -Please C &C


First time posting images. Looking for honest constructive critique. Where/How to improve the images.

http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-9bD5ZL26XPs/U-L4TP8od2I/AAAAAAAAAmo/K3F9B-Xdwa4/w958-h640-no/IJ-20140727-1650.jpg

http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-d9u9NSW2-6Y/U-L4TFpg9jI/AAAAAAAAAmo/UZTEEAA0hiE/w958-h640-no/IJ-20140727-1669.jpg

http://lh6.googleusercontent.com/-F9vxb6MJL6M/U-L3W0V4q0I/AAAAAAAAAlg/LCMSwBXmOys/w793-h839-no/IJ-20140531-_DSC3483.jpg

http://lh4.googleusercontent.com/-_NlA1K6D8ww/U-L3TeTLIdI/AAAAAAAAAlI/jMU7c6DEoMc/w958-h505-no/_DSC9554.jpg



Aug 06, 2014 at 11:19 PM
nextelbuddy
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Some Kid Pics -Please C &C


thanks for sharing, you have very beautiful children.

A few things I could recommend would be to step back. get more of the kids environment into the shot. Let their actions tell the story. Them alone isn't enough many times unless you are doing formal portrait close ups which these dont feel like that. These feel like cropped scenes from a moment in their tiny lives.

i will say out of all of them, #3 is my favorite. you captured a glimpse of her having a moment of reflection literally and figuratively.

Watch your kids play and interact with each other and their surroundings, frame them with things around them as well. A wall, or a tree or foreground elements like getting further back and lower in the water to have a stronger composition that's more compelling.

you have general exposure and other things pretty spot on so just get your composition in check and fill the frame more with a story and not just the person as the subject itself.



Aug 07, 2014 at 09:39 AM





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