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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Lunch Break - x-post


Thanks for looking,

Bob







Jul 31, 2014 at 12:41 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Lunch Break - x-post


Wonderful composition on this Bob, I like how the fence comes right around to the couple.

Cheers Ray



Jul 31, 2014 at 05:21 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Lunch Break - x-post


Ray,

Thank you for your comment. FM'er on Photo Critique suggested more of a pano crop...think it plays a little better.

Regards,

Bob







Jul 31, 2014 at 06:41 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Lunch Break - x-post


Very well seen Bob! I agree, the wider view looks better to my eye, now if that large plastic cup were not there...
Douglas



Aug 01, 2014 at 07:01 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Lunch Break - x-post


Douglas,

I'll try revisiting the cup. Several alternative, tighter crops suggested on PC which I think will work even better.

Thank you for your comment,

Bob



Aug 01, 2014 at 09:50 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Lunch Break - x-post


I like the wide view too Bob. Better leading lines, and a sense of space the other doesn't have. I think without the cup, they'd have nothing to wash down lunch.


Aug 01, 2014 at 09:51 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Lunch Break - x-post


Yes, the pano crop looks better.
Great shot Bob



Aug 01, 2014 at 06:45 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Lunch Break - x-post


I am going to have to defer to your 1st image Bob! I like how the curling of the picket fence seemingly ends at the couple who end the frame. The closer focal length, to me, gives more depth and scale to the image.

But glad others perspective gives everyone another dimension to contemplate!
Nice work on both!
Dan



Aug 02, 2014 at 09:36 AM





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