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Photographer: Anh Tu Nguyen Photography
Make-up: Sadie Suckerpunch
Fashion Designer: FRANK ROMMERSKIRCHEN's WORK
Assistants: Thu Thuy, Nadine Holl
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Tale of the songless Swan[/url] by Anh Tu Nguyen Photography, on Flickr



Jul 27, 2014 at 04:48 PM
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Lot's of foreground content that adds distraction and robs from attention to the Swan, and your heavily processed color palette is all over the map. I'd limit that a lot to a primary chromatic theme and support that color with one or two complimentary shades.

If it's a swan you're wanting to suggest, perhaps rendering the "swan body" dress in white rather cyan blue will alert the viewer to what you are wanting them to see.

Perhaps I've missed what you've trying to do with your project, if so disregard the above.

John Caldwell



Jul 27, 2014 at 06:42 PM
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I like the concept, colors and general feel of the photo


Jul 28, 2014 at 07:52 PM
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She only gets a small portion of the total canvas. I vote for filling the frame with her and leaving out much of the other stuff.


Jul 29, 2014 at 08:37 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Tale of the songless Swan (Model Sara)


I like, when I scroll down to where I can't see the sky anymore, I like it better.


Jul 30, 2014 at 12:48 AM
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Jim Rickards wrote:
She only gets a small portion of the total canvas. I vote for filling the frame with her and leaving out much of the other stuff.


But i like the abyss and how fragile she is in the middle of the location



Aug 07, 2014 at 04:55 PM
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tighter portrait crop with the sky and foreground IMO


Aug 08, 2014 at 12:03 AM
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I don't mind the sky so much, but the fact that it is tilted a bit makes it seem like a horizon that needs to be corrected.

I agree that she is small in the frame, but if printed / viewed large, probably looks great

greg



Aug 10, 2014 at 01:32 PM
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gheller wrote:
I don't mind the sky so much, but the fact that it is tilted a bit makes it seem like a horizon that needs to be corrected.

I agree that she is small in the frame, but if printed / viewed large, probably looks great

greg


I think the trees on the right are higher than on the right and the cliff is tilted too so you have the feeling that horizon needs to be straightened



Aug 14, 2014 at 04:21 PM
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Bleed me an Ocean by Anh Tu Nguyen Photography, on Flickr



Aug 14, 2014 at 04:21 PM





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