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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Storms over Tuolumne + Edit


Conditions were quite interesting in Yosemite with thunderstorms rolling in and out of the area. I was waiting for some lightning to show itself, but I had to settle with story looking clouds. C&C welcome and appreciated!

Tim




#1 Unicorn and Cathedral






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#2 Lembert






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#3 Parent and Children



Edited on Jul 27, 2014 at 04:45 PM · View previous versions



Jul 26, 2014 at 10:27 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Storms over Tuolumne + Edit


I like the slope of the foreground in #1 and the scary sky.

Phil



Jul 27, 2014 at 02:48 AM
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Hey Tim,

#1 is my favorite, what a cool looking sky there. The only thing I wish that wasn't in that one was the one lone larger pine tree. Shifting over to avoid that I think would have been a nice little touch. But still a cool shot.

#2 has the foreground too bright. I think I would pull back on the midtones over the whole shot.

#3 the shadow line doesn't work for me. But a creative eye with the shot!

Jim



Jul 27, 2014 at 10:35 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Storms over Tuolumne + Edit


Thanks Phil and Jim! Edits have been added per Jim's critique. The tree in #1 was unavoidable without going off trail and trampling the meadow, so I opted to clone it out instead

Tim



Jul 27, 2014 at 04:43 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Storms over Tuolumne + Edit


Hey Tim,

I like the edits! You really took those first two shots up another notch!

Good edits,

Jim



Jul 27, 2014 at 09:52 PM





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