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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


Finally finished processing and organizing the photos from my recent visit to Alaska and Yukon Territory. Here are my top 5 scenic shots. Comments welcome!

#1


#2


#3


#4


#5





Jul 21, 2014 at 04:03 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


I really like the first one! My only suggestion would be to try and get rid of the small white hut and yellow machinery on the left side.


Jul 21, 2014 at 04:33 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


#1 would be nice, but cutting off the top of that peak? That's a major no-no in Landscape photography. The image feels cut off at the top, and unless you had cropped this from a larger image with more space at the top, you are kind of stuck.

My favorite would be #5

Jim



Jul 21, 2014 at 05:51 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


Thank you for the comments. I realized the cut-off peak only after got back to the bus! By the time I spotted the view, our bus was already loaded and I had no choice. Anyhow, thank you for the C&C.


Jul 22, 2014 at 06:51 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


In response to your request for feedback:

#5 is very nice, best of series.

#1 Agree with the minor changes recommended

#2 lacks a focal or anchor point

#3 would bring out the shadow deal in the distant mountain. I like the composition

#4 would nix this image. Horizon spits the center of the frame. Nothing pulls into the picture



Edited on Jul 25, 2014 at 08:32 PM · View previous versions



Jul 22, 2014 at 07:08 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


shekarn64 wrote:
Thank you for the comments. I realized the cut-off peak only after got back to the bus! By the time I spotted the view, our bus was already loaded and I had no choice. Anyhow, thank you for the C&C.


so little is missing you might almost be able to just add a few pixel wide strip of blue sky across the top



Jul 22, 2014 at 09:09 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Alaska and Yukon Territory


#5 is my favorite




Jul 22, 2014 at 09:10 PM





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