Bob Jarman Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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Almass wrote:
Getting there.
The first pic is great and shows a nice expression of both mother and daughter with the mother watching and participating to the story book moment.
The mother is very much OOF as she should be.
The B/W treatment works this time with the desat.
However, the light is all over the place with still hot spots remaining in the highlights.
What such picture needs is to balance the lighting with a skew towards the hero who is the face of the little girl.
All the light and dark patchwork shadows on the mother's face, the little girl right index finger, the white bed sheet adjacent to the book, the stuffed toy texture, the little girl white sleeve, the mother's knuckles......etc
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Almass,
Thanks for tidying up the image - flaws undetected in the heat of the moment. Substantial improvement.
Regards,
Bob
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