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Hi Nexed,
The edit is much better here, except for 2 things. That cloud in the middle is now blown out, and being the brightest area in the scene it now becomes the visual focal point. That's not what you want. You need to use a layer mask here to protect that cloud from blowing out, or if you are using a preset program like it sounds like, then find an option that adds the contrast while not allowing areas to blow out.
The 2nd thing is still the same as was first mentioned, the right side of the image is too dark. Its like a band of darkness over the whole right side, almost like an ND Grad was used sideways in the image. This would be a case where a layer mask over that right side could be used to allow that side to not get so dark.
I think the composition has a lot of potential, but you are dealing with some tricky light in this, so a bit more care will be needed to bring out that full potential.
Jim
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