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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Jetty 1

My new passion has been doing landscapes. Did a few 20x30 framed prints for a local restaurant. This did not make the cut. I think the dust issues that I was having with my D600 showed up at 20x30.

Jul 09, 2014 at 07:14 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Jetty 1

The simplicity of the shot lends itself well to BW.
Care to share EXIF?
I really like the smoothing from long shutter speed.
There is a nice balance between the foreground and first pole.
I think the 50% sky/bottom doesnt work here and I would crop from the top, eliminating 40-50% of the sky, then rebalance by taking a bit from the right. It will not end up the format you have but I think might be more dynamic.
Might want just a touch more detail in that lower left corner and deepest shadows in the other rocks.
Scott

Jul 09, 2014 at 07:20 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Jetty 1

I will go back and shoot it again with hopefully a more dramatic sky.

Nikon D600
ISO 100
Nikon 28-70 at 60mm
124 seconds
F/11

Jul 09, 2014 at 07:32 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Jetty 1

yeah, or maybe a bit more on top for breathing room
with a more dramatic sky the original placement of the horizon might work better....
Scott

Jul 09, 2014 at 07:51 PM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Jetty 1

Beautiful shot! I might be inclined to try some focus stacking to keep the nearest rock in focus and to remove that odd tower in the top left of the frame.

Jul 10, 2014 at 02:31 PM


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