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I agree with the feedback you had above.
The new presentation eliminates the broken lines of beach, mountains, cloud.
The two images do not relate strongly to me, except by crop (which I like), general subject, and a bit of tonal interplay found in the magentas in a lighter area in the sky on the upper image, left side. I think a variation in color processing/temp, time of day of the same scene might be stronger. Or two images with a bit more tonal interaction.
I think the two image presentation is worth continuing to play with.
Scott
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