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dhp_sf wrote:
Nice work Joe! 15, 26 and 28 are great. 7 & 24 are nicely posed. All look great from a technical aspect especially considering the terrible harsh sun angle you had to work with.
22 I think if you have a version with both looking at the camera it would be better than with her eyes closed. There's a little bit of a disconnect here with her looking more just kind of resting in the moment with her eyes closed and him looking at the camera. Just my opinion...
for 22, I do, but it is not as nice. Not even sure I will deliver it. Still lots of progress to make on interaction. This was actually shot before the e-session I posted a few weeks ago, so I think I am getting a bit better.
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Prettym1k3 wrote:
Really nice coverage, dude. Really nice.
I love me a good cigar/smoking shot. Haha.
Ultimately, I really liked these. The venue seems a little drab in decor, but you got some fantastic moments.
#22 is a little awkward because her eyes are closed, and then I look up and he's smiling, and leaning over. Straighten him out, and get him a serious look, or have him lean down and kiss the top of her head, and you've got a winner.
A few dust spots in the ring shots I'd clone out.
As always, I love your post processing!
Yea, cigar shots are a must. They are talking about framing that shot for each of the guys. It almost feels like cheating they are so easy to shoot, but everyone loves them so I will shoot one for every group that lights up a few cigars.
Yea, should have worked 22 a bit more.... Kinda peeved that I had my rim light up too high also (which caused the odd shadows)
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