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Bob Jarman
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I'm always gun-shy when family (extended in this case) are involved.

Any thoughts?

Thanks,

Bob

Jul 05, 2014 at 06:39 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Appreciate your thoughts? Available light

Outstanding! I especially like the pose with the turn of the shoulders and the hands up. The expression is very engaging. Great processing, but if this were mine, I would probably tone down the bright areas on the face.
Joe

Jul 05, 2014 at 09:28 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Appreciate your thoughts? Available light

joe604 wrote:
Outstanding! I especially like the pose with the turn of the shoulders and the hands up. The expression is very engaging. Great processing, but if this were mine, I would probably tone down the bright areas on the face.
Joe

Thanks Joe,

Maybe something like this? Sort of a kludge - have not re-sized yet

Jul 05, 2014 at 09:58 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Appreciate your thoughts? Available light

I like the first version Bob. On my screen, the highlights are excellent. The brightness seems appropriate for the whimsical expression.

Jul 06, 2014 at 08:22 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Appreciate your thoughts? Available light

Both are working for me.

Kent in sD

Jul 06, 2014 at 11:20 AM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Appreciate your thoughts? Available light

Very nice, eyes sharp, well processed. I also like both images but would like to see you bump the exposure of the baby's face but not quite as bright as the first. I like the additional shadows in your re-work but feel the face needs the additional exposure boost. A re-work to illustrate.

Jul 06, 2014 at 10:50 PM

Bob Jarman
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Appreciate your thoughts? Available light

Thanks for the rework Barbara,

#2 is a quadtone, first time I've tried that.

In this case, I'm letting her mom decide

Regards,

Bob

Jul 07, 2014 at 10:00 AM


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