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p.2 #1 · p.2 #1 · Critique Please! Website/Logo Concept (rough draft) | |
Either the 1st or 3rd. The stacked name takes up too much space on the page, especially on anything mobile. I'm not a big fan on the handwritten font, so i'd probably go with the 3rd, but if you really wanted the photography there, it could be there using a different font.
But yes, infinitely better than the previous iteration. The frames on the previous site hide your work, and having the facebook and blog links as important as your photography seems odd. New look is much cleaner and highlights your work. I agree with others that I might do more than one gallery if you're going to stick that this approach. People will never make it to your portraiture stuff otherwise.
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