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I'm going to disagree, and think that the person on Mesa Arch makes that shot, esepcially in a meditative pose, and silhouetted. The last thing the world needs is yet a 2-millionth shot of Mesa Arch at sunrise, otherwise. I think the compo could be improved, though. It feels Right-weighted, and including the whole arch isn't necessary to make this image work. I like it better cropped to a vertical aspect, including just the right side, where the human figure counterbalances the visual weight of the rock and snow at bottom left.
With #2, it's a cute shot with the dog, but the left edge doesn't add to it and makes the tree feel too centered. I'd suggest cropping to 4x5 aspect, losing the L. edge.
With #3, the sunburst on 1 side, and Balanced rock and the person on the other side of the frame gives 2 competing 'areas of interest', and leads to the 'eyes bouncing back and forth' feeling for the viewer - not comfortable.
#4, has been done a lot before, but still interesting. Needs some breathing room beneath the people in the notch.
#5 is quite nice as it is (see, I'm not always picking at everything!)
-David
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