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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Some color for a change...


Thanks for looking,

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Jun 14, 2014 at 07:16 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Some color for a change...


Good set, the oof hand in the first image bothers me a tiny bit but otherwise I have nothing I would change.


Jun 14, 2014 at 09:48 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Some color for a change...


Rarely do I like an image equally well in mono as color. The third one (hammer motion) works well either way. I suppose it is because the colors are somewhat muted (period clothing) rather than vibrant.

The images of the gals all look a bit soft ... #1 @ f/1.4, so go figure. #3 @ f/16, might be some diffraction @ again, go figure. #2 @ 5.6 should be nice & sharp, is it a bit of missed focus or



Jun 14, 2014 at 10:25 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Some color for a change...


I am with Ben and Kent on the comments above.
In the first, maybe a head and shoulders crop?

Scott



Jun 15, 2014 at 04:13 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Some color for a change...


Thanks guys,

Appreciate your observations - I intentionally left sharpening off when re-sizing, perhaps a bad choice. #2 is intentionally softened.

Thanks again, & have a Happy Father's Day!

Bob



Jun 15, 2014 at 09:43 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Some color for a change...


Maybe a slightly different crop and some tweaks to add a little visual drama?












Jun 15, 2014 at 03:37 PM
Bob Jarman
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Some color for a change...


AuntiPode wrote:
Maybe a slightly different crop and some tweaks to add a little visual drama?



Nicely done,

Thanks!

Bob



Jun 15, 2014 at 04:34 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Some color for a change...


Bob - Agree on the suggestion for crop of #1.
I definitely prefer the color version of #4. The red-hot metal being worked really conveys more action to the photo.

- John



Jun 16, 2014 at 08:05 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Some color for a change...


I definitely like the color versions compared to the B&W. The colorful clothes and draws the focus to the hands and faces.


Jun 16, 2014 at 02:27 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Some color for a change...


#3 would look nice with a portrait crop.


Jun 16, 2014 at 11:32 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Some color for a change...


Hope you don't mind a little play either Bob. Maybe a little too far; what's wrong w/ b/w anyway? lol



http://imageshack.com/a/img843/993/k8vss.jpg



Jun 18, 2014 at 12:57 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Some color for a change...


Hope you don't mind me playing, but here's another take on your last photo. I prefer a tighter crop of the girl with bare feet cooling off in the water right above the two "water"melons. A magical moment.





"Water"melons




Jun 18, 2014 at 08:22 AM





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