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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Courtney


Hi All, Courtney has no modelling experience + was even reluctant to have her Picture taken C&C welcome.
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Jun 10, 2014 at 10:48 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Courtney


Like 'em all but last two really work for me. Pretty girl and good use of light and DOF to make them pop.


Jun 10, 2014 at 11:15 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Courtney


Thanks a lot andyjh, much appreciated.
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Jun 10, 2014 at 11:19 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Courtney


Very nice! Love her eyes and hair!


Jun 11, 2014 at 12:58 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Courtney


I'm a sucker for redheads. With green eyes. She has looks, smile and poise. Why is it all the pretty folk say they're not photogenic or don't like their photo taken? I don't like to have my photo taken, as I don't carry broken lens insurance.


Jun 11, 2014 at 01:21 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Courtney


Nice set. Pretty model. I'm a sucker for red heads too (my wife is one). Tell her she needs to do more shots..


Jun 11, 2014 at 02:38 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Courtney


You found a pretty model and the pics look good. I find that you are zoomed in too far in some.

In #2, both elbows are cut off. And #5 might be a tad better if you had stepped back a bit.

#3 - A little darkening of the right arm would put more attention on the face. Our eyes tend to go to the brightest part of the frame.

#4 - Is there a colour cast to her face in this one? It seems a bit different from the others.




Jun 11, 2014 at 05:26 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Courtney


Hi Ray!
This is my take on these images of your beautiful redhead Courtney:
#1 - A higher camera angle would have been better for this one
#2 - Nice expression but her elbows are cut off
#3 - Her pose seems awkward, nice dark background but a shame about the light area at the top of the frame, armpit is not attractive, ideally hands should be photographed with the edge of the hand towards the camera - more elegant, feminine
#4 & 5 - These are the best but she looks best on a dark background as in #3 to show off her lovely hair and face

Hope this helps

Tony



Jun 11, 2014 at 07:06 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Courtney


Thanks a lot Herb, GoodEgg + Paul appreciate you looking + sharing your comments.
Paul I certainly will get her out for more shots as she enjoyed it after
Cheers
Ray



Jun 11, 2014 at 10:58 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Courtney


Hi Jim + Tony, thank you kindly for sharing constructive criticism all points duly noted for future reference.
Jim in No4 say its gotta be my post processing
Cheers
Ray



Jun 11, 2014 at 11:06 AM
 



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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Courtney


Nice shots


Jun 11, 2014 at 03:52 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Courtney


I have to agree No 4 looks a bit green to me. 4 & 5 are my favorites here. Pretty model.


Jun 11, 2014 at 04:36 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Courtney


Wow, you did a great job with your camera/lens and she is so beautiful..!!

Marcelo



Jun 11, 2014 at 05:26 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Courtney


Thanks a lot Wildcats_Fans, NCAndy + Marcelo, much appreciated..
Cheers
Ray



Jun 11, 2014 at 09:35 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Courtney


Nice work, Ray. Your exposure and colors look spot on to me!

The only piece of CC I'd offer other than what's already been said is that the lighting on #3 would have greatly benefited from a reflector placed 1-2m off camera right. It would have gently filled in those shadows on her face and left side.

Other than that, great work.



Jun 11, 2014 at 10:12 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Courtney


Thanks a million James + again advice duly noted.
Cheers
Ray



Jun 11, 2014 at 10:26 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Courtney


Very nice sires.


Jun 12, 2014 at 04:08 AM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Courtney


Nice portraits ! I like #1, except for bright band at top competing for attention. #4 is my favourite



Jun 12, 2014 at 09:05 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Courtney


Thank you kindly Jonathan + sridhar, comments much appreciated..
Cheers
Ray



Jun 12, 2014 at 09:13 PM





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