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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


here's a beauty/fashion set I did last week for Sarah - she wanted some spring photos for herself so we headed to nearby High Park while the Cherry Blossoms were in bloom. very little work was done outside of Lightroom for this set..

as always, please let me know which of these you like best & feel free to offer your criticism(s) =)


01 http://www.kaycephotography.com/Models/Sarah02/Sarah02-05.JPG

02 http://www.kaycephotography.com/Models/Sarah02/Sarah02-03.JPG

03 http://www.kaycephotography.com/Models/Sarah02/Sarah02-06.JPG

04 http://www.kaycephotography.com/Models/Sarah02/Sarah02-10.JPG

05 http://www.kaycephotography.com/Models/Sarah02/Sarah02-12.JPG

06 http://www.kaycephotography.com/Models/Sarah02/Sarah02-15.JPG


full set of 15 photos for anyone interested: http://www.kaycephotography.com/model-galleries/sarah-set-2-beauty-portraits/


May 19, 2014 at 01:48 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


Hi.

Quick Comments:

A pretty girl/woman always helps a photo.
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You mentioned the flowers on trees were in bloom, making for a good location shoot opportunity. But in this set of images (which mostly have short DOF) I only see one flower and that is in her hair.

From this set i like images 1, 2, 4.

Favorite image from this set was image 2.

Good expression shown by model. She looks comfortable with camera.

Don't like image 6 and consider the composition poor (awkward pose with cut off hands).
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I hope these comments help you.



May 19, 2014 at 02:25 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


Hello again...

Another point I meant to say earlier...

When viewing these photos, I had these thoughts (positive thoughts):

"These are the best photos I have seen this photographer/member post."

I hope that encourages you. It was truly my impression on seeing the images.



May 19, 2014 at 02:39 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


Great job. Beautiful model with good lighting and PP. 2, 1, 5 and 4 are my favorites in that order. 6 seems a little odd with the crop. (touch down??)


May 19, 2014 at 04:55 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


I think they're boarder line overexposed / a little hot on my screen.


May 19, 2014 at 09:08 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


The bright clothing is working against the photos here. With a bright/white background and her wearing white as well, she's getting lost.

Other than that model looks good and you have shown her assets off well.

Regards
Bud



May 19, 2014 at 09:44 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


I feel the photos are too hot as well. Lots of blown out areas. Nice otherwise.


May 19, 2014 at 11:31 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


elliotkramer wrote:
I feel the photos are too hot as well. Lots of blown out areas. Nice otherwise.


Mataz426 wrote:
I think they're boarder line overexposed / a little hot on my screen.


bbourizk wrote:
The bright clothing is working against the photos here. With a bright/white background and her wearing white as well, she's getting lost.

Other than that model looks good and you have shown her assets off well.

Regards
Bud


thank you for looking & sharing feedback! much appreciated,


Wildcats_Fans wrote:
Great job. Beautiful model with good lighting and PP. 2, 1, 5 and 4 are my favorites in that order. 6 seems a little odd with the crop. (touch down??)


Steady Hand wrote:
Quick Comments:

A pretty girl/woman always helps a photo.
______________

You mentioned the flowers on trees were in bloom, making for a good location shoot opportunity. But in this set of images (which mostly have short DOF) I only see one flower and that is in her hair.

From this set i like images 1, 2, 4.

Favorite image from this set was image 2.

Good expression shown by model. She looks comfortable with camera.

Don't like image 6 and consider the composition poor (awkward pose with cut off hands).
____________

I hope these comments help you.

Another point I meant
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thank you both very much! your favourites mirror mine mostly, and #6 was included in this set because it was an image I was torn about even including in the set of 15 images for the site - while I really like her expression in #6, her posture was definitely a bit odd. having you two both confirm that that photo was a bit awkward is re-assuring!

also, i definitely appreciate that encouragement & all the feedback both of you in particular have given me previously as well.. thanks again.



May 20, 2014 at 05:36 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


I liked these images for the most part but wanted to add that as a water mark hater I have found yours very tasteful and I appreciate the extra work you put into making it. Well done sir.


May 21, 2014 at 12:17 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


Bryan Mordt wrote:
I liked these images for the most part but wanted to add that as a water mark hater I have found yours very tasteful and I appreciate the extra work you put into making it. Well done sir.


Thank you very much Bryan! I too am a watermark hater at heart, but unfortunately in this day & age, I feel it's a necessity for me.. I appreciate that a lot.



May 21, 2014 at 04:02 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Sarah - Beauty Portraits ft Cherry Blossoms


I guess I will be the contrarian! I find them just right, exposure wise. My monitor is carefully calibrated. She doesn't get lost at all.
Lovely model with a feel of real spontaneity to the posing. Number 3 my fav.



May 22, 2014 at 01:17 AM





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