Home · Register · Join Upload & Sell

Moderated by: Fred Miranda
Username  

FM Forum Rules
Landscape Posting Guidelines
  

FM Forums | Landscape Photographer | Join Upload & Sell

  

Archive 2014 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ

  
 
Evan Baines
Offline
• • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


An image from our recent Sedona trip. Your thoughts and comments are appreciated!

http://bainesphoto.com/files/gimgs/36_zentree-1_v2.jpg



May 18, 2014 at 03:58 PM
Jonathan Huynh
Offline
• • • • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


Composition is quite nice and great exposure.


May 18, 2014 at 04:09 PM
Daniel Smith
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


You lose a lot including the top of the eroded face with the greenery on it. A more considered image composing without that and to the left a touch to get rid of the lower edge of the cliff where the green snows would help.
Then in a bit to get rid of the cliff patterns on the right about 2/3 the way up as you have it now.

Nice feel but not tight enough for a cohesive image.



May 18, 2014 at 04:23 PM
elitefroggy
Offline
• •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


I like it the way it is, and love the colors. Dave


May 18, 2014 at 05:45 PM
alatoo60
Offline
• • • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


Like the composition and colors, but agree with Daniel about the eroded top, it does not look attractive and does not add to the image.
A bit longer exposure might be better, as there seem to be some underexposed areas under the rocks.

Sasha.



May 18, 2014 at 05:54 PM
Timmeh
Offline
• • •
Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


Hi Evan,

I think the top of the cliff is necessary to keep it from feeling cut off, plus it echoes the shape of the stone in the river. The green on orange contrast very well. My only quibble is the lightest part in the upper left.

Tim



May 18, 2014 at 08:17 PM
donaldkagan
Offline

Upload & Sell: Off
p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · West Fork of Oak Creek, Sedona, AZ


Great contrasting colors. Well done.


May 19, 2014 at 02:41 AM





FM Forums | Landscape Photographer | Join Upload & Sell

    
 

You are not logged in. Login or Register

Username       Or Reset password



This site is protected by reCAPTCHA and the Google Privacy Policy and Terms of Service apply.