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1. Laura
http://www.bestindigital.com/Other/Embedding/i-nk2Zrgn/0/X2/Untitled-2-X2.jpg

2. Grace
http://www.bestindigital.com/Other/Embedding/i-SFBXPbj/0/X3/DSC_7644-X3.jpg



May 16, 2014 at 09:37 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Laura & Grace in B&W


the first lower angle is really shin!


May 16, 2014 at 10:19 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Laura & Grace in B&W


I'm not really liking the lighting in either photo.

In photo 1 the lighting on the face is uneven. The viewer's eye is drawn more to the top of the Fender guitar. Also the face is not in focus, whereas the top of the Fender is. What is the main subject of the photo, the guitar or the woman ? I would play around cropping some of the left side out also.

Photo 2 I really like the location, the model, her attire. The pose although whimsical, I think it could be better. My main problem is insufficient lighting on the face and no separation between the hair and the background. Her eyes are too hard to make out.

They're good photos, but I think maybe a little more post-processing could make them better.

Oh yeah, one more thing, Sooners rule !



May 16, 2014 at 10:48 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Laura & Grace in B&W


I agree with most of what you said except that last line


May 16, 2014 at 10:57 AM





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