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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


Hi! I'm primarily a portrait photographer and am interested in trying out some fashion-inspired photography. This is only my second shoot at something like this. Constructive criticism only, please, so that I can reflect on this shoot and make improvements going forward. Thank you!

1. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/22/r5ea.jpg
2. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/856/96ed.jpg
3. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/18/i3ed.jpg
4. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/594/zzff.jpg
5. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/534/jnth.jpg
6. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/89/cr3k.jpg
7. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/834/e2ir.jpg
8. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/89/tkme.jpg
9. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/594/xszr.jpg
10. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/35/w60t.jpg
11. http://imagizer.imageshack.us/v2/800x600q90/856/wnv0.jpg



Apr 04, 2014 at 12:54 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


I like your style and point of view, Harmony.


Apr 04, 2014 at 02:31 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


The styling is great for a younger generation. The editing is spot on, and I love that.

What I will say is that, at least for me, for high fashion, what I see mostly isn't the use of the 35mm or 50mm focal length. It's usually 85 or longer to contain the distortion and keep it to a minimum. Just my $0.02.

These have a little more of a lifestyle feel to them, but I actually really like that.



Apr 04, 2014 at 03:45 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


GoodEgg wrote:
I like your style and point of view, Harmony.


Thanks!



Apr 04, 2014 at 04:42 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


Prettym1k3 wrote:
The styling is great for a younger generation. The editing is spot on, and I love that.

What I will say is that, at least for me, for high fashion, what I see mostly isn't the use of the 35mm or 50mm focal length. It's usually 85 or longer to contain the distortion and keep it to a minimum. Just my $0.02.

These have a little more of a lifestyle feel to them, but I actually really like that.


Thank you for the feedback. She is of the younger generation and her style definitely reflects her personality. I do shoot with a lifestyle perspective and I felt like I was going against the grain with this session but have to say that I'm happy with the results, overall. It is just a start on a long term goal.



Apr 04, 2014 at 04:45 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


Whether lifestyle or fashion, some rules still apply and they're really just common sense. But it's easy to get so involved with the model that you overlook them. Generally, background (all those things behind and around the model) can make or break an image. Is there anything back there that appears to protrude out of the model's head or body (#1)? Does the bkgd enhance the model or does it blend with and/or add confusion (#1, 4, 7)? But keep at it. You have a good start.


Apr 04, 2014 at 08:30 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Jordan | Atlanta, GA


Interesting use of selective focus and unusual viewpoints. A few shots suffer from distracting backgrounds (#1) or too much "dead space" (#11) but overall a nice effort.


Apr 05, 2014 at 09:04 PM





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