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Keopele19
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Before I print, please offer constructive criticism or tips.

Unfortunately, I had only one opportunity to shoot this iconic spot and it was midday. I waited a few minutes for the best opportunity between clouds.

Nikon d7000, tamron 17-50/2.8. 20mm f/8 1/100, polarizer and an ND 0.6 i believe.

http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3742/13493034245_11c106c479_c.jpg

Edited on Mar 29, 2014 at 04:35 PM · View previous versions



Mar 29, 2014 at 02:30 PM
Jonathan Huynh
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Yosemite Tunnel View


How big are you thinking of printing ?.
Have you consider convert to B&W.
The view in this image is breathtaking view, exposure both sky and ground is right on but it's lack of colors and contract.

Edited on Mar 29, 2014 at 03:44 PM · View previous versions



Mar 29, 2014 at 03:30 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Yosemite Tunnel View


I can almost smell that crisp, mountain air....


Mar 29, 2014 at 03:43 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Yosemite Tunnel View


always beautiful regardless! but I agree lack of color/contrast since the sky is clouded over. possibly a tighter crop as well? bring our eye to the subject.


Mar 29, 2014 at 04:49 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Yosemite Tunnel View


breathtaking, i'm headed there this June and images like this are getting me very excited


Mar 30, 2014 at 10:50 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Yosemite Tunnel View


Even mid-day this is pretty great. The only thing i would work on is brightening that dark shadow on the left edge where the mountain meets the sky. Bring it in line more with the other side.




Mar 30, 2014 at 10:52 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Yosemite Tunnel View


thanks for the comments, here are a couple revisions:

cropped a little more with the dark spot taken out:
http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3745/13525193223_1f77eddae9_c.jpg

a BW conversion i'm not crazy about (i'm not good at it and let lightroom do most of the work):
http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7328/13525869985_e4aece11f0_c.jpg



Mar 30, 2014 at 08:55 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Yosemite Tunnel View


looks great with that dark spot lightened up a bit. nice work!

the black and white is nice as well but i think the color still is the one for me



Mar 31, 2014 at 08:18 PM





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