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Mar 27, 2014 at 03:47 PM
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p.1 #2 · Derelict Pier


I'm kinda mixed on this.
The colors are appealing but the image reads almost as a duotone, adding to mood but losing some sustaining interest for me. The fall off of light along thee building on the pier says there isnt much to find by following the eye down the pier's length, and apart from the color play, most of the interest is in the foreground.
I have a similarly angled pier image, with less appealing color. And my critique in part echos the feedback I got. Just not enough subject. If you had a boat passing by in the water on the right or some other feature to bring the eye to, the image would be more successful.
As it is, pretty, but doesnt keep me coning back for more.

Scott



Mar 28, 2014 at 01:06 AM





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