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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Boys lacrosse - shooting at 10,000 ISO isn't so bad... | |
skipchang wrote:
Denis,
Here's one of the pictures I recently took at my son's lacrosse game. Any pointers? I have to use my flickr account to post the picture since I don't have enough posting to include pictures.
<a href="https://www.flickr.com/photos/skipchang/13353003993" title="2014-03-21_PC_Lacrosse_vs_ThunderRidge_373 by Skip Chang, on Flickr"><img src="https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7085/13353003993_157c6b9bb8.jpg" width="500" height="357" alt="2014-03-21_PC_Lacrosse_vs_ThunderRidge_373"></a>
Thanks,
Skip
I am no Lacrosse expert, but here are a few comments (and with only one picture, which is pretty small too, it's hard to give a lot of pointers):
- It looks like you were low enough to show under the helmet visors, that's good!
- You could have cropped tighter (in general tighter is better)
- Timing wise, two comments:
- the dark blue player is a little too close to the white player. And since he is on the foreground this causes the eye to hang on him at first look. A little more separation between the two would allow to viewer's eye to go directly to the white player, which is the one I think you are trying to show here.
- The stick net in front of the dark player's face
- The guy in the far background is a distraction... and what makes it worst is that he is just standing still, kind of killing the feel of action in the photo.
- I like the mountains in the background (Colorado?), but it looks like the horizon is a little tilted... (nitpicking here, but you gotta watch the "horizon police" on the FM Sports forum )
- It could also use more post to make the image "pop" more: more contrast, clarity, less black, push a little the shadows, exposure and saturation...
Hope this help.
Denis
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