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Archive 2014 · Charli

  
 
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Charli


Here are a couple of senior shots we did last fall. C&C are welcome that's why im here. We want to improve in every aspect. Thanks






















Mar 10, 2014 at 03:13 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Charli


I enjoyed the light leak in the first shot.


Mar 10, 2014 at 03:38 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Charli


In #1, I'd crop out the 'light leak' - crop just above the hat and windscreen. Keep the attention on the two models.


Mar 10, 2014 at 04:17 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Charli


I like the crop in #1. #3 is my favorite.


Mar 10, 2014 at 04:29 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Charli


Nice series.

#1 the horizon being way off catches my attention (barn in the BG is tilted)

Nice job getting light under the brim

The lipstick is a bit too much for me, esp in the #3 and #4

I love the car! thanks for sharing. Nice work!



Mar 10, 2014 at 05:03 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Charli


Thanks but believe or not I didn't do anything to the lipstick. thought about toning it down a little. I will try the crops and Thanks again for your help.


Mar 10, 2014 at 05:31 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Charli


Lipstick is definitely an eye catcher, especially in #4 where everything else is a relatively neutral color.


Mar 10, 2014 at 10:00 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Charli


Great photos. #3 & #4 are my favorites. Yes, the lipstick does pop. Is her skin that smooth on her face? How much PP did you do?


Mar 11, 2014 at 11:21 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Charli


I really like the lighting and crop of #1 but the pose of her squating kills it for me


Mar 12, 2014 at 12:23 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Charli


She doesn't look like a senior about to graduate, more like a very experienced model in her mid twenties....very nice!


Mar 12, 2014 at 01:44 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Charli


Not very much in PP. Her skin is a photographers dream. Just a few adjustments and done. She is a great student/athlete and very sweet. Great volleyball player. Thanks again for the comments. I will post the unedited version of #1


Mar 14, 2014 at 05:59 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Charli


#1 Unedited shot in raw





#1 Unedited




Mar 14, 2014 at 06:08 PM





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