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Manoj
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Couple of landscape shots from Pune, India. These were taken over the winter. Its not too cold in this part, but dramatic enough to make it worthwhile to go out and shoot.

First one is a sunrise from just outside of Pune.


Nature: Morning show at Temghar by Manoj Prabhu, on Flickr



Next is a sunset taken at a reservoir (catchment area) of a dam around Mulshi.


Nature: Evening show at Mulshi by Manoj Prabhu, on Flickr


Comments/Suggestions/Critiques on technique, processing, etc are welcome.
Thank you



Mar 09, 2014 at 08:02 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Nature's shows


Hi Manoj,

#1 is really nice, you captured the light and the feeling of a new day well there. #2 looks pretty good, but that stick in the shot is really distracting to the eye. I can see your intent was to use it as a leading line, but since it doesn't "fit" the scene, it ends up distracting more than helping.

Jim



Mar 09, 2014 at 12:31 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Nature's shows


First pic is Outstanding, second I have to agree with JimFox. The stick may have been to used as a leading line, but since it doesn't the scene, a bit distracting.


Mar 09, 2014 at 12:36 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Nature's shows


Two very nice images. I disagree with Jim. I like the stick. It balances out the scene and it does lead me in, naturally placed or not. I'm more distracted by your bottom edge. Some kind of dark thing going on there.

Brian



Mar 09, 2014 at 12:48 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Nature's shows


#1 is super! . . . due to subject, composition, light and atmospherics. #2 is fine but it is 2nd place to all previously mentioned items.
Dave



Mar 09, 2014 at 01:47 PM
Manoj
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Nature's shows


Thank you Jim, Jonathan, Brian and Dave.

Well, the same debate was going on in my head (about the stick). I have another shot taken on a different day and there's no stick in that. I did intend to use it in the composition, but I can see why you say it doesn't fit there.

Thanks for taking the time to post the feedback. I really appreciate it.

Manoj



Mar 10, 2014 at 09:50 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Nature's shows


Great Shots! Love the first one.


Mar 10, 2014 at 11:29 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Nature's shows


Very nice Manoj. I really like the first one...


Mar 10, 2014 at 11:36 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Nature's shows


Very nice work Manoj. I like No. 2 more.


Mar 10, 2014 at 01:51 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Nature's shows


Very nice captures. I am with Jim Fox, the stick is a bit of a distraction but I really like both.


Mar 11, 2014 at 08:44 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Nature's shows


HI Manoj,

These are really nice.

Phil



Mar 11, 2014 at 11:57 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Nature's shows


Outstanding images...both of them. The softness you captured really takes me right into the image and gives me that early morning feel.

I agree, the stick in the 2nd shot sort of detracts from the image.

Overall, excellent images.



Mar 11, 2014 at 01:08 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Nature's shows


Incredible set!!


Mar 11, 2014 at 08:18 PM
Aaron Cowan
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Nature's shows


I really like #1. The curve of the river and the fog/clouds work great along with the light. Nice


Mar 12, 2014 at 10:54 AM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Nature's shows


great shots

Gerald



Mar 12, 2014 at 05:12 PM





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