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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Rusted bucket


From an old mining camp area

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Feb 23, 2014 at 09:55 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Rusted bucket


I think you need a way to isolate the bucket from the new door background and shoot tighter, closer in.
Scott



Feb 23, 2014 at 10:04 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Rusted bucket


Hey Scott, thanks for the feedback.
I think what I'm learning here is that i'm terrible at titles.
I like the composition with bucket and door but I agree it doesn't isolate the bucket by itself.

I did take a few of just the bucket. See what you think of these.

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Feb 23, 2014 at 10:17 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Rusted bucket


Last works best for me.
Here is a 4:5 crop, some selective bump of clarity and sharpening on the bucket, tiny curves adjustment and a pull back of highlights a tad.
I like the "framing" of the fence. Moved the subject to the left to be a bit more dynamic.
Scott







Feb 24, 2014 at 09:13 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Rusted bucket


sbeme wrote:
Last works best for me.
...
Scott



Yup.



Feb 24, 2014 at 01:52 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Rusted bucket


I like Scott's take. My suggestion for a title is "Bucket List".


Feb 24, 2014 at 02:08 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Rusted bucket


AuntiPode, Eyeball, Scott, thanks - your adjustments look better for sure.

Anybody have suggestions on #2? I like the 'scene' quite a bit... rusted bucket hanging on railing... blowing snow.... slightly lopsided building...

Maybe it should be titled "Weathered?"



Feb 24, 2014 at 03:25 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Rusted bucket


Last one works


Feb 24, 2014 at 04:48 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Rusted bucket


Here's an updated #4 - I do like the focus on the bucket details here. Thanks for the suggestions




Feb 25, 2014 at 12:42 AM





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