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snapsy wrote:
Apologies in advance
* Entire scene looks tilted to the right
* The trees at the far right distract from the subject without adding any context, scale or interest. I would've walked around so that the trees were not part of the image.
* Generally, half-circles of lakes (typical of costal scenes like this) yield unbalanced compositions
* The deep saturation of the central band in the sky looks unnatural and is offputting
* The aspect ratio for this image doesn't resonate with the scene (too square)
* The bright sky draws the eye away from the foreground subject. I would lighten the foreground, including the kayak....Show more →
No apologies necessary; I wouldn't know any better if I didn't ask.
- I'm not sure what I could have done about the central band in the sky, but it does look off. In parts of CO and AZ the sky sometimes is fake blue, but I think the way I processed it added to the saturation. I actually never added vibrance or saturation to it...I actually took away (scary thought in this instance).
- I see how the composition is shifted to the right. EVERYTHING is there - to the right.
- I think one of the dilemmas for me, is that sometimes I'll see the subject situated in a particular way that I like, but then maybe I don't consider other angles. In this situation I thought the angle of the boat was beneficial, but didn't consider the trees distracting at the time. I didn't want to move the boat since it wasn't mine. I was a visitor.
Thanks snapsy. Some of your comments coincided with a few others above, but additional thanks for aspects not covered.
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