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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Senior prom, California


Hi FM,

It's been a long while since I've posted. Had an opportunity to shoot a very energetic couple this past weekend. First time using off-camera flash (430ex & Yongnuo 568).

C&C always welcome

#1
http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3701/12283015216_02643b86bc_h.jpg


#2
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5520/12282579343_ba771960e9_b.jpg


#3
http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3670/12282594383_306a11b158_b.jpg


#4
http://farm3.staticflickr.com/2844/12282987536_09309362a0_b.jpg


#5
http://farm4.staticflickr.com/3688/12282877374_9123bf88fe_b.jpg


#6
http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5474/12283009686_f0389dff34_h.jpg



Feb 13, 2014 at 02:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Senior prom, California


Looks like you missed focus on #1, and is she flipping us off on #4? Kinda like #3 and #6, though.


Feb 13, 2014 at 08:58 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Senior prom, California


I wouldn't have guessed prom - engagement, but not prom. But I am probably just showing my age...


Feb 13, 2014 at 09:54 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Senior prom, California


Great shots. Some of them need to be cropped in tighter.


Feb 13, 2014 at 03:06 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Senior prom, California


boxman wrote:
Looks like you missed focus on #1, and is she flipping us off on #4? Kinda like #3 and #6, though.


Last shot looks to have some motion blur or missed focus as well.



Feb 14, 2014 at 11:09 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Senior prom, California


It was mentioned already but #1 is not at all in focus. Additionally, #2 and #6 look over exposed. She definitely looks like she's giving the finger in #4.

I think if you are going to use flash you still might want to use a faster shutter speed. I can see motion blur in #6.

Sorry to be so negative.



Feb 15, 2014 at 02:04 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Senior prom, California


Pictures of this sort demand technical finesse. These are close but no cigar. You need to pay attention to tonal values and keep them in balance. But it's good that you do recognize the potential of these lovely dusk situations. One more thing: that starburst between the noses of the couple—why? In this picture it's just an awkward gimmick. Use these touches only when they add to the impact not as unnecessary seasoning.


Feb 16, 2014 at 07:53 PM





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